我最好的朋友

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你有一位最要好的朋友，名叫王英。她是三好学生，她学习勤勉，性情温厚，门门功课学得都好。她是个热心肠的人，经常帮助别人。在你有病时，她帮你补课。她把省下的钱送给需要帮助的人。去年的一天，她为了救一个落水的小男孩献出了自己的生命。每当你看见她的照片就情不自禁地想起了她。

请你就上述内容，再加上你自己的想象和发挥，写一篇回忆性的记叙文。

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My Bst Frind

Whn I look at th old photo, I can＇t hlp thinking of my bst frind, Wang Ying. At th ag of fiv, I mad frinds with hr. Sh livd nxt door to m, and was thn svntn yars old. Th twlv yar＇s gap in ag didn＇t hindr① our growing fondnss② for ach othr. Sh tratd m as a youngr sistr of hr own.

In school, Wang Ying was a 3-A studnt③. Sh did wll in vry subjct. But sh nvr smd to b proud of hr achivmnts. Sh was hard-working and good-naturd to youngr studnts. I rmmbr th littl incidnt that took plac two yars ago. On day I caught a bad cold and had a high fvr. I had to stay in bd. This prvntd m from going to school. I was vry anxious for missing so many classs whn suddnly th door opnd. In cam Wang Ying.

“Hllo, Tong-tong. How ar you fling today?” sh said to m with a frindly smil. “Don＇t worry about your lssons. Now lt m mak thm up for you.” Bfor I could say anything, sh had takn th nglish txtbook out of hr schoolbag. I was so movd that I couldn＇t kp back my tars.

Wang Ying was a kind-hartd girl. Though sh was th only child of hr parnts, sh was not spoild. Sh was polit to tachrs and studnts, gnrous to hr frinds, and kind to th poor. Sh was always rady to giv hr pockt mony sh had savd to thos in nd without hsitation.

On day last yar, on hr way hom, Wang Ying saw a littl boy slipping into a pond. Th boy was struggling dspratly④ in th watr. Sing this, Wang Ying quickly ran to th pond whil shouting for hlp. Sh jumpd into th cold watr to sav th boy. With th hlp of som workrs, th boy was finally rscud. Howvr, our littl hro, lik Luo Shngjiao, lost hr own lif.

Popl wr sad ovr hr dath. I flt somthing was missing in my lif. For th happinss of th boy＇s family, Wang Ying sacrificd⑤hrslf. Hr dath is a glorious dath wightir than Mount Tai.

（选自1987年8月11日《上海学生英文报》）

【词语解释】

①hindr [＇hind+] v．阻止；阻碍；妨碍

②fondnss [＇f&ndnis] n．喜爱

③a 3-A studnt 一个三好学生

④dspratly [＇dsp+ritli] ad．拼死地；不顾一切地

⑤sacrific [＇s$krifais] v．牺牲；献出

【写法指要】

文章起笔，触景生情。看见旧照片就“情不自禁地想起了我最好的朋友。”然后，文章运用夹叙夹议的方法写了“朋友”的三方面的优秀品质和三件事：1）她是三好学生，“我”生病时误了课，她帮“我”补课；2）她是个热心的人，经常把自已攒的钱给别人；3）她是一个慷慨的人，为救别人牺牲了自己的生命。这样，从平时的表现，到关键时刻的献身，英雄形象的成长过程便活生生地展现在我们面前，给人以启迪，给人以教育。