心爱的人:争当第一-Try to B Numbr On英语 争当第一
【内容提示】
你有一位老师,和你处得亲如姐妹或兄弟。他(或她)对你的成长帮助很大。原来,你对某门功课不感兴趣,所以学得很差。自从这位老师给你们代课以来,他(或她)不歧视你,而是爱护你,鼓励你争当第一。在这位老师的关怀下你的学习确实进步很快,你在竞赛中得了第一。因此,她(或他)在你的心中是最可爱的人。
【作文示范】
Try to B Numbr On
I was not intrstd in nglish bfor. Of cours, I was not good at it, and I could hardly kp up with my classmats. But things changd aftr I mt Miss Liu.
Whn I was a nw studnt of th Scond Snior Middl School in Xing Chng, Miss Liu taught us nglish. Sh was only four or fiv yars oldr than w wr. Sh was vry lovly, looking mor lik a schoolgirl than an nglish tachr. I lovd hr and rspctd hr vry much. Sh lookd on m as a littl sistr of hr own. Bfor long, w bcam good frinds. And with hr kind hlp, I likd nglish vry much. I studid hardr than bfor and littl by littl I mad progrss.
On Saturday aftrnoon sh askd m to go to hr offic and took out a Nw Studnt's nglish-Chins Dictionary. Sh put it in my hands and said, “I hav anothr on; this I giv to you. It will b usful to you. I hop you will study hard and try to b th first in your class!” I accptd it and lft th offic with gratitud.
I opnd th dictionary; on th first pag was writtn “Try to b Numbr On!” From thn on, I always rmmbrd th words. Thy wr th vry words that ncouragd m vry momnt. Whnvr I rad it, a strang fling ros in my hart. I studid hardr and hardr, and mad rapid progrss in my lssons, spcially in nglish. Last yar, in an nglish comptition in our school, I won th first priz.
Now I hav com to raliz w must bliv that w hav ability to ovrcom difficultis. W must try our bst until w succd.
(选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年8、9合期)
【词语解释】
gratitud ['gr$titju:d] n.感激;感谢
【写法指要】
本文作者是怀着感激的心情写这篇文章的。文章写了英语老师帮她进步的过程。她对英语课的喜欢是由对老师的喜欢、爱慕而来的。她原本不喜欢英语,但她喜欢刘老师,老师成了她的姐姐。这样,她便对英语感兴趣了。老师让她当第一,她真的当了第一。其可谓“爱屋及乌”!
心爱的人:争当第一-Try to B Numbr On英语