难以忘怀的经历

【内容提示】

人人都知道，地震是一件惊天动地，令人恐惧的事。假如你经历过一场地震而又获救、幸免于难，你会有一种什么感觉呢？你肯定会有很多话要倾诉，你肯定一生也不会忘记这样的经历。如果你经历过这样的事当然有东西可写，即使你没有经历过也可以设想这样的情景来写一篇短文。

【作文示范】

An Unforgttabl xprinc

Whn I was a littl girl, in th summr vacation in 1976, I wnt to my mothr＇s homtown , Tangshan.

Aftr I got thr, at first I stayd at my uncl＇s hom . I was vry happy in my uncl＇s hom bcaus my uncl had a daughtr who is oldr than I. Sh oftn took m to visit som placs. W spnt tn days happily. I rmmbr just on th tnth day thr was a big arthquak. It happnd about thr o＇clock in th morning whn I was draming. I wok up to find myslf undr a hap of rocks . I couldn＇t mov. I didn＇t, in fact , know anything about what was happning until my uncl savd m from th rubbl①.

During th arthquak most of th houss fll down. W st up many tnts to liv in and rcivd a lot of food from vry city in our country. Thy hlpd us to tid ovr② thos hard days. I think if w hadn＇t livd in Nw China w couldn＇t hav survivd th big arthquak. I am vry lucky and so ar my uncl＇s family.

（选自1987年4月21日《上海学生英文报》）

【词语解释】

①rubbl[＇r)bl] n．碎石；碎砖，破瓦

②tid[taid] ovr 克服；渡过

【写法指要】

能够在唐山那样的大地震中幸存下来，确实是一件幸运的事，令人终生难忘。作者分三个层次写作此文：1）作者去唐山舅父家度暑假，前十天非常高兴；2）第十天晚地震，舅父从瓦砾中把作者救出；3）舅父一家和作者都幸免于难，祖国各地救援；表达对祖国的热爱。