I am, also fl th sun''s hat, `` `Oh, may b whr thsunclouds, th sun is not possibl from th ship! Still do not know why I fl th sun''s hat ah. Gradually, by noon, ah, I go out to s, I do not know what tim th sun jumpd out! At how th sun so hot ah, I at lunch and not s th hat, I am mor strang, original, To rally躲到clouds whr th sun! Night, I can s th sun, not how th sun! I at th dinnr, Oops! How th sun has not! Th middl of th night, I look at th sun, but th sun sms to b th dog at half, how ar bnding th ?名师点评：作者小学二年级就能用英语写作文实在难能可贵!这篇作文比较好的一点是层次感强。不过英语单词之间是要有空格的，这样打字上去别人怎么能看得清楚呢？（学乐中国特聘教师：黄雅楠老师）2008-8-12 17:40:00
