My moter is weautiful but she is teh good woman.She like play thecomputei.She play computer in the night.she is heavy 62 kg. she is not tall.I like my mother名师点评：
You have a beautiful and kind mother!If I were you,I＇ll share it with everyone.So more description,it can be better!Come on!! 你有一位美丽善良的令人羡慕的母亲，如果我是你，我会迫不及待地想要跟每个人分享我的幸福。再多一点点描述，让你的母亲更生动更形象地展现在读者们的眼前，相信你的文章会添色不少。对于人物描写的文章，主要包括以下几个要素：外貌、语言、动作和心理描写。提供一篇小作文让你参考哦： My mother loves me very much.And I love her,too.She is very beautiful.Her face is round.Her eyes are big.Her mouth is small.She is not tall.My mother works in a bank.She likes English and computers. Mum,I love you!（快乐学堂特聘教师：周老师） 2009-3-19 14:10:56
