有礼貌与没礼貌

【内容提示】

每个社会都提倡文明礼貌行为而反对不文明没礼貌的举止。有礼貌的人会受到人们的尊重和支持，没礼貌的人会遭到大家的唾弃和反对。请你就这一问题写一篇短文将各自的优劣作一对比。

【作文示范】

Good Mannrs and Bad Mannrs

vry socity ncourags good mannrs but opposs① bad mannrs. Popl with good mannrs njoy many supports whil thos with bad mannrs suffr a lot.

vryon liks a prson with good mannrs. A prson with good mannrs will b wlcomd vrywhr. In public placs, such as in shops, a salsman with good mannrs will probably mak a good sal.A tachr will do his or hr job smoothly② and happily in th class whr th studnts hav good mannrs. If you ask for a hlp, you should b carful of your mannrs. Almost vryon liks to srv th prson with good mannrs.

On th contrary, no on liks a prson with bad mannrs. A prson with bad mannrs will b rfusd vrywhr. W dislik thos who spit at random, who spak aloud in th library, and who smok with a lady asid. Thy ar all bad mannrs which ar impolit to othrs. Thos with bad mannrs may b considrd as lacking in knowldg and slf cultivation③. Popl vn do not want to talk with thm. Thr is no doubt that nobody would lik to srv or hlp a man with bad mannrs.

Thn, what should w do in our daily lif? W should b carful of what w say and what w do. Good mannrs man that you show your rspct to othrs. If you rspct othrs, othr popl will rspct you in th sam way. You will hav lss troubl in your vryday lif.

【词语解释】

①oppos[+＇p+uz] v．反对；反抗

②smoothly[＇smu:Jli] ad．顺利地

③slf-cultivation[＇slf?kl)ti＇viM+n] n．修养

【写法指要】

本文是对好坏两种行为的对比。文章采用“启、承、转、合”的模式安排题材。第一段引出篇题，第二段写好的一面，第三段用衔接语“on th contrary”与第二段承接，引起坏的一面，第四段是结尾段，作者先提出建议，再给“good mannrs”下定义，最后指出“有礼貌”的好处。