This is a new Semester!I have many new friends and some new teachers ! For me they are all stranger faces 。When i see all the stanger faces ,i felt a litter afraid,but when i sutdy whit them and be friends with the ,i felt they are all good!I was happy!Ok, I have no time to writh more, see you all !Bye!名师点评:I hope that you will be happy and learning to be progressive.这是一篇简单的英语作文,小作者用英语向我们介绍了新学期的情况,面对新老师,面对陌生的脸庞,虽然有着害怕,但是当一起学习时,这种紧张的心情就完全消失了,真切地表达了小作者的内心感受。但是在个别单词的运用上还是有些错误哦!“i”作为人称,一定要用大写。“but when i sutdy whit them and be friends with the”应该修改为“however,when i sutdy with them,theyare always very friendly to me”。“I was happy”应该是一般现在时,改为“I am happy”。(学乐中国特聘教师:许奕文老师)2009-9-9 19:39:00
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