多事记人:一位外籍英语老师-A Forign nglish Tachr 由 一位外籍英语老师
【内容提示】
你有一位老师,你很敬重他(或她)。这位老师对你的帮助很大。你学习有困难时他(或她)鼓励你;你找上门求教时他(或她)和蔼耐心地给予帮助;他(或她)懂几种语言,这使你很佩服。同学们和这位老师处得很融洽,常在一起搞活动。请你通过多种事情写这位老师。
【作文示范】
A Forign nglish Tachr
Our school, Shiyan Middl School in Fuling, was foundd only four yars ago. It is rathr a nw school, but now it is gtting wll-known for its tahing. W hav a forign nglish tachr, namd Hans Barthl. H is th only forign nglish tachr in all th schools in our city.
Hans is a tall man with blu ys. H coms from Munich①, in Grmany. That is to say, Grman is his nativ languag and yt h mastrs svral forign languags, including nglish. H tachs us spokn nglish. I still rmmbr th first tim h askd m to answr a vry asy qustion, but I was too nrvous to answr it, standing dumbfoundd②. H smild, ncouragd m and lt m sit down. From thn on, I mad up my mind to study nglish hardr.
On vning I pluckd up ③ my courag to visit Hans. Whn I rang th doorbll, h cam out and lt m in. At first I was a bit nrvous whn talking with him. To mak m fl asy h spok vry slowly, and I could undrstand quit wll. I was so glad that I flt quit at hom. Now, I always go to his room on Saturdays. W talk a lot and watch TV togthr. With his hlp, my spokn nglish gratly improvd.
Hans is larning Chins all by himslf. H can spak som Chins now. H can talk with our Chins tachrs. If h dosn't know how to say a crtain thing in Chins, h will ask us to tach him till h can say it corrctly.
On Christmas I snt him a gift, which h accptd. H spnt that vning mrrily with us Chins studnts and didn't fl lonly at all.
This is Hans, a kind man and a good nglish tachr.
(选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第8、9合期)
【词语解释】
①Munich ['mju:nik] n.慕尼黑(德国城市)
②dumbfoundd [d)m'faundid] a.惊讶得发呆的
③pluck [pl)k] up 鼓起;振作;振作精神
【写法指要】
本文通过几件事写了外籍教师Hans的为人和工作态度。第一段对是作者所在学校的简介。第二段介绍Hans的基本情况及Hans对“我”的鼓励。第三段写作者与Hans的接触和Hans帮“我”提高口语的情况。第四段写Hans自学汉语的情况。第五段写“我们”与Hans一起过圣诞节。第六段总结:Hans是一个热心的人,一个好英语老师。
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