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假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租—Tnt(n.).I’m vry happy to rciv your lttr, and I’m glad to har that you will go to China to larn Chins hr. I hav alrady found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Strt, which is not far from Jianxin Chins School. Bus No.11 can tak you thr, and it is on stop bfor th Chins School. Th flat is on th third floor with 3 rooms, on of which is bdroom, th othr two ar bathroom and kitchn. Thr ar a bd, a sofa, a dsk and som chairs in this 25 squar-mtrs small fiat, and th rnt is 500 yuan pr month. Mayb this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my bst to mt your nds. If it is not suitabl nough, writ to m and I will look for anothr bttr plac.

Hop you will com hr soon!

All th bst!

　Yours,

　Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。Dar Bob,

Wlcom to China! You wrot to m to find a plac for you.

I hav found an apartmnt on Fangcao Strt nar Jianxin Chins School. It is on th third floor and thr’r thr rooms in it: a bdroom, a kitchn, and a bathroom. Thr is a bd, a sofa, a dsk and a chair in th bdroom. Th hous is 25 squar mtrs and th rnt is 500 yuan pr month.

Also from this hous you can gt to your school asily. Just tak th No.11 bus at th bus-stop in front of th building. It is only on stop. At last, will you plas tll m th tim you arriv? Thn I’U b abl to mt you at th airport, s you.

Bst wishs !

　 Yours,

　 Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dar Bob,

How ar you ths days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll com to our city to larn Chins. You askd m to find a plac for you. Now I’v found on which I think is prtty good. Th plac is on Fang Cao Strt which is nar th No.11 bus stop. It’s just on stop away from Jianxin Chins School.

Thr ar thr rooms, a kitchn, a bathroom and a bdroom. Though it is not vry big, only 25 squar mtrs, I think it is suitabl. By th way, th rnt is 500 yuan pr month. I hop you’ll lik it. If not, I’ll try to find anothr plac for you.

　 Yours,

　 Li Hua 满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。本作文共2页,当前在第1页12