崇敬之情:我的理想-My Dram 我的理想

【内容提示】

每个年轻人都有自己的理想。理想来自崇拜。你对什么人怀有崇敬之情，你就可能有什么样的理想。而人们在小时候往往最崇敬的是自己的父母，因而你的理想就会是长大之后做一个和父亲或母亲一样的人，也许是工程师，也许是科学家，也许是教师等等。那么，你最崇敬的人是谁？你的理想是什么呢？请写一篇文章谈谈你的理想。

【作文示范】

My Dram

Whn I was a child, I wantd to b a tachr. My fathr was a tachr, and h taught m a lot. I worshipd him vry much.

On my tnth birthday, h askd m,“What do you want to b whn you grow up?”I answrd proudly,“I want to b a tachr lik you!”On haring this, my fathr was vry happy and said to m, “Work hard and your dram will com tru.”

Not long ago, on of my primary school tachrs was ill. Sh wantd m to tak hr plac for two wks. I was glad but nrvous. My fathr said to m,“This is a good chanc. Siz it! I wish you succss!”

Whn I cam into th classroom, th childrn wr vry happy. I introducd myslf to thm. Soon, I got on wll with thm. Thy all likd m and I lovd thm. With my fathr and hadmastr's hlp, I did th work vry wll.

Now, I oftn miss thos lovly childrn. That xprinc had mad m vn mor intrstd in bing a tachr in th futur.

（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第5期）

【词语解释】

worship ['w :Mip] v．崇拜；尊敬

【写法指要】

本文作者用的都是一些最常见的词和最简单的句子，但文中所表达的内容却情深意重。从对当教师的父亲的崇敬写到自己的立志，从父亲的勉励到代教的成功，从对学生的热爱到坚定信念，丝丝入扣、逐步推进、渐次深化，把对教师的崇敬之情通过具体的事例写得真真切切。

崇敬之情:我的理想-My Dram