7月3日 晴怎么说今天都是开心的，写了一篇好的英语作文，受到老师的表扬，这种感觉真是叫一个棒啊！我给大家看一下啊！美丽的公园(A Beautiful Park)One day ,morning ,I go to the park. The birds are singing in the trees. My mother and I went to the local park. Everything was beautiful.The sky is blue.The sun is magnificent.You can see many flowers and trees in the park.Some children are playing in the park.I saw many boats on the lake at the foot of the hills. Later on , mother and I played hide-and-seek in the park.Today, I has a good time.上篇写到我很累，但是，我通过了我自己的努力，证明给了大家，我永远是最棒的！再苦再累没关系，因为，有付出才有回报，只有自己付出了心血与汗水，才能够去的决定性的胜利！名师点评：你的努力老师看到了，不管从你的英语作文还是中文作文，都有了一定的水准。小作者通过文字，不仅向读者显示了自己的英语作文水平，而且也表达了内心最真实的想法——“有付出才有回报，只有自己付出了心血与汗水，才能够去的决定性的胜利”，一点都没错，“天道酬勤”，只有心血和汗水，才能换来成功。只要心中握着这个信仰，老师相信你，一定会有出色的成绩！（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2009-7-2 18:27:00
