我的家乡
【内容提示】
你的家乡在华北平原,大运河流经你们村的东面。请你根据下面的内容提示写一篇环境描写文。
①你家祖祖辈辈住在这里。
②儿时你常和小伙伴们在河岸上玩耍。看着来来往往的船只,希望长大后能周游世界。
③你们村大约有800口人。
④村前有一个水塘,盛产鱼。
⑤村北有大片土地,春种秋收。
⑥运河和村庄之间有一片果园。
⑦大部分村民过上了富裕生活。
⑧村前有两条道路交叉而过。
⑨去年你们村有35名学生高中毕业,12人考取了大学。
【作文示范】
My Homtown
My homtown lis on th Plain of North China. Th famous Grand Canal of China① is to th ast of our villag. This is th plac whr my forfathrs ② hav livd for gnrations. Whn I was a boy I oftn playd with othr childrn nar th bank of th canal. I watchd th passing boats, and I wishd to travl all ovr th world.
Thr ar about 800 popl in our villag. A pond, tming with ③fish, lis in front of th villag. I usd to swim thr in summr and skat in wintr. It was in this pond that I spnt th happist days of my childhood.
To th north of our villag ar grat filds. Whn spring coms, th crops bgin to grow, turning th filds grn. Whn crops turn yllow in autumn, th pasants start to harvst thm.
Btwn th canal and our villag is an orchard. Thr wr only a fw kinds of fruit trs yars ago, but now th pasants grow many sorts, including pach, plum, appl and orang.
Th majority of th villagrs hav bcom much bttr off. About a quartr of th housholds hav bought tlvision sts and tap rcordrs. A rading-room and a library hav bn built. vry vning many young popl go to th vning school to larn scinc and rad nwspaprs.
Two roads cross in front of our villag. On summr vnings, popl sit undr th trs njoying th cool brz④. Th houss in our villag ar wll laid out.
By th nd of last yar, 35 studnts in our villag had graduatd from snior middl school, and 12 studnts wr nrolld ⑤ at collgs.
This is my homtown. I hop you will mak a visit hr on day.
(选自1988年5月24日《上海学生英文报》)
【词语解释】
①th Grand Canal [k+'n$l] of China 中国大运河
②forfathr ['f&:?fa:J+] n. (常用复数)祖先;前人
③tm [ti:m] with 充满;富于
④brz [bri:z] n.微风
⑤nroll [in'r+ul] v. 招收;使入学
【写法指要】
1)本文基本上是按方位描写的。先概述村子坐落的位置,接着写村东、村前、村北、运河与村之间,最后又回到村前的情况。这是一幅粗线条描写的风景画,属于白描。
2)差不多每一段都写有人的活动场景,这样写能使文章有生机。